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Okay, so before everyone freaks out, I haven't forgotten about my need to feature the last winner, I just started a new job and that's not an excuse but whatevs ANYWAY
Summer is a season of mixed emotions. For kids is means no school, ice cream and pool parties. but for adults, especially ones with children, it means more work. It means long days in the muggy hot weather.
But however you feel about summer, one cannot deny that its sunny, and hot (most of the time ;D )
For this poem we'll be writing a variation of a Cinquain. Traditionally, they have five lines, and follow a different pattern. This Pattern I'm creating is of my own design, so, it doesn't have a name.
Line 1: "Summer"
Line 2: 2 adjectives
Line 3: 3 verbs
Line 4: 3 sets of 2 word noun and verb combinations (I'll explain)
Line 5: an acrostic poem of "Summer"
Line 6: (empty)
Line 7: "Summer" (again)
So, Like this:
Pots
metal, cold
Cooking, heating, boiling
I stir. Grandma's magic. Dad burns.
Perfect On Top Stoves
Pots
Summer should flow much better. Now, if you want to bash or if you want to praise summer, that's up to you, either is acceptable.
As always, the Contest ends on the Equinox
Please submit here -> askmetowriteapoem.deviantart.c… thank you
and, good luck
Summer is a season of mixed emotions. For kids is means no school, ice cream and pool parties. but for adults, especially ones with children, it means more work. It means long days in the muggy hot weather.
But however you feel about summer, one cannot deny that its sunny, and hot (most of the time ;D )
For this poem we'll be writing a variation of a Cinquain. Traditionally, they have five lines, and follow a different pattern. This Pattern I'm creating is of my own design, so, it doesn't have a name.
Line 1: "Summer"
Line 2: 2 adjectives
Line 3: 3 verbs
Line 4: 3 sets of 2 word noun and verb combinations (I'll explain)
Line 5: an acrostic poem of "Summer"
Line 6: (empty)
Line 7: "Summer" (again)
So, Like this:
Pots
metal, cold
Cooking, heating, boiling
I stir. Grandma's magic. Dad burns.
Perfect On Top Stoves
Pots
Summer should flow much better. Now, if you want to bash or if you want to praise summer, that's up to you, either is acceptable.
As always, the Contest ends on the Equinox
Please submit here -> askmetowriteapoem.deviantart.c… thank you
and, good luck
Winners for 'Ask Me To Describe The Perfect S
We had four entries:
mine: :thumb375169011: Mertus' :thumb375133758: RierieMarie's :thumb368604986: and SuPa4Natural's :thumb365391477:
All have great merit and one might notice, that I've commented on and Favorited all 3 of them. because they're all worth read (if you haven't)
however, comma, one stood out the most to me (as it must, for there to be a winner) and that, was Mertus's.
For the description of spring as a woman, and for he's love of a simpler, less brutal spring. Of spring still in bed, still groggy from winter :D
As always, there will be a feature of our artist, both here and my personal profile.
I'll be posting the next c
True to form: I suck....
So, I was sitting in my livingroom on the Solstices and thought "i have to update the group" clearly I forgot... and its 4 days later yay, sooooo I'm not ready... I've had 3 months, and I'm not ready
Sorry y'all.
I'll be back on before the end of the week, promise.
Contest: Ask Me About My Rude Neighbors
At first you might be thinking "wow.. that's random" or "he must be running out of ideas" but the truth is, this came about because I have rude neighbors lol
I always imagined having neighbors over to the house or maybe being friends with them. I always wanted to have that "girl next door" experience. Maybe she was my first kiss? Or simply a crush that'd never be fulfilled? Nope, none of that. When I was little, I didn't know any of my neighbors, and now, at my new home, I WISH I didn't know any of my neighbors! UGH
They're so flipping rude! Here's the deal; I want you, to either, make up or describe your or someone else's rude neighbors!
Featured Artist: dikarya
In our contest :thumb365988046: we had a few entries but ~dikarya (https://www.deviantart.com/dikarya)'s poem :thumb356239958: out shined the other few :)
In the last four months he's written some excellent pieces such as :thumb353480865: and :thumb344962439: .
I can't wait to see what he has for us in the following months.
1) When Did You First Really Enjoy Writing?
Around the time when I was 11-12; I wrote awful, angsty, poetry.
2) What's You Favorite Thing to Write About?
People, emotions, weird fucked-up things... Death and decay... All sorts of things.
3) What work of literature, is your all time favorite?
I really like the "Lord Peter Wimsey"-books, by Dorothy L.
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Question: Must the 2 word noun verb combinations be noun then verb? Or can they be verb then noun?